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要說(shuō)搜集句子，首先要有一個(gè)堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的后盾，那么這些后盾從哪里來(lái)呢？
這要看你需要什么句子，如果是找每一段開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題的句子，最好還是找一些文學(xué)性比較強(qiáng)的東西，比如說(shuō)一些給白領(lǐng)看的經(jīng)濟(jì)類文章，我們經(jīng)常提到了的[經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)人].The.Economist.就屬此類。要想尋找經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)家的話最好還是去verycd這個(gè)網(wǎng)站http://www.verycd.com/topics/2727001/ 這里就是一個(gè)很好的選擇。比如說(shuō)無(wú)老師就從2008年11月15日這一期的第12頁(yè)找到了一個(gè)很好的句子，很適合當(dāng)文章的開(kāi)頭。Asked what China will do to rescue the world from financial turmoil, its officials these days have a boilerplate answer：its greatest contribution will be to keep its own economy running smoothly.我們把它放在Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.這個(gè)作文題目之下，就可以改寫成Asked what teachers will do to improve their students, the response in high schools have a boilerplate answer：the greatest contribution of homework will be to keep its their students appreciating their knowledge entirely.
那么我們提煉一下Asked what …… will do to ……, the response in …… have a boilerplate answer：the greatest contribution of …… will be to keep its their …….就是一個(gè)十分優(yōu)秀的作文開(kāi)頭模板。
我們也可以從同樣是2008年11月15日這一期的120頁(yè)找到Further evidence of emerging markets’ potential comes from the experience of Britain’s AstraZeneca in China.這一句只要稍加修改就可以變成一個(gè)非常優(yōu)秀的.2-4段的段落開(kāi)頭，首先把他模板化Further evidence of …… comes from the experience of …… in …….然后再加入一點(diǎn)倒裝句式來(lái)證明我們的文學(xué)水平Not only does ……come from the experience of …… in ……., but (also) evidence of ……subsequently(further) prove……這樣一個(gè)優(yōu)秀的論證段的段首句模板就完成了。
至于例子的模板，那么就是新聞的天下了，我們?nèi)匀豢梢栽凇督?jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)人The.Economist》里面尋找。比如說(shuō)找到了這么一句話South Korea’s capital city now has been named their most favored travel destination two years in row, according to the report, as 11.4 percent of the Chinese, 9.8 percent of the Japanese, and an overwhelming 20.0 percent of the Thai expressed their preference for Seoul, toppling cities like Tokyo, Paris and Honolulu in the survey. 這里面我們就可以把這個(gè)句子直接提煉為模板…… now has been named their most favored …… two years in row, according to the report, as 11.4 percent of the ……, 9.8 percent of the ……, and an overwhelming 20.0 percent of the …… expressed their preference for ……, toppling cities like …, … and … in the survey.相識(shí)的數(shù)字，加上確鑿的低點(diǎn)，一切顯得都是那么無(wú)可辯駁，但是實(shí)際上這就是一個(gè)模板。
當(dāng)然我們不肯能每一個(gè)句子都是這么長(zhǎng)，因此我們可以加入很多For example, Therefore, 所引導(dǎo)的句子來(lái)增強(qiáng)文章內(nèi)部的節(jié)奏感，使得讀者不會(huì)感覺(jué)到過(guò)于疲憊。
至于末段的模板則是有一些講究的，但是當(dāng)無(wú)老師看了無(wú)數(shù)篇作文和《經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)人The.Economist》的文章之后，無(wú)老師開(kāi)始反思我們很多學(xué)生寫的“ After ruminating over all these factors, ”“It is more advantageous for us to make decision alone,”“As far as I am concerned, I come to the notion that”這類作文結(jié)尾，是否是一種符合歐美人思維的文章，因?yàn)槟阒灰晕呀?jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)人的文章找?guī)灼恼碌慕Y(jié)尾看一下就會(huì)知道，其實(shí)這里面絕大多數(shù)時(shí)候，都是以羅列多方