梗概英語(yǔ)作文試題
梗概作文200字
一、考綱要求
1． 概括的準(zhǔn)確性；
2． 字?jǐn)?shù)大約30詞；
3． 不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子。
二、難點(diǎn)分析
1． 如何迅速、準(zhǔn)確地捕捉要點(diǎn)；
2． 如何巧妙串連，將要點(diǎn)串成篇章；
3． 如何靈活詮釋?zhuān)苊獬u的嫌疑。
三、解題思路
1． 巧妙利用opinion，預(yù)測(cè)材料內(nèi)容
讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)先讀后寫(xiě)。那么“讀”的材料肯定是與要“寫(xiě)”的材料話題是相同的，至少是相關(guān)的。因此，我們可以利用這一關(guān)系來(lái)進(jìn)行有效的預(yù)測(cè)。以下是兩個(gè)例子。 實(shí)例一（閱讀材料－議論文）
We find that bright children are rarely held back by mixed-ability teaching. On the contrary, both their knowledge and experience are enriched. We feel that there are many disadvantages in streaming pupils. It does not take into account the fact that children develop at different rates. It can have a bad effect on both the bright and the not-so-bright child. After all, it can be quite discouraging to be at the bottom of the top grade!
Besides, it is rather unreal to grade people just according to their intellectual ability. This is only one aspect of their total personality. We are concerned to develop the abilities of all our pupils to the full, not just their academic ability. We also value personal qualities and social skills, and we find that mixed-ability teaching contributes to all these aspects of learning.
In our classrooms, we work in various ways. Sometimes the pupils work in pairs; sometimes they work on individual tasks. We encourage our pupils to use the library, and we teach them the skills they need in order to do this efficiently. And advanced pupils can do advanced work: it does not matter what age the child is. We expect our pupils to do their best, not their least, and we give them every encouragement to achieve this goal.
[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]
1. 用約30詞概括短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；
2. 用約120詞就“學(xué)校該不該分班”這個(gè)主題發(fā)表你的看法。
本例中的主題是“學(xué)校該不該分班”，那么，我們可以根據(jù)這個(gè)話題進(jìn)行如下預(yù)測(cè)：
(1）閱讀材料的論點(diǎn)是什么：該？不該？
(2）論據(jù)是什么：該的理由？不該的理由？
(3）如何論證：有無(wú)實(shí)例？如有，又是什么實(shí)例？
這樣，心中有了疑問(wèn)，就好比大海航行有了指南針一樣，只要循著這一方向去找，一定能在最短的時(shí)間里到達(dá)大洋的彼岸——迅速捕捉要點(diǎn)。
此外，當(dāng)對(duì)話題的具體內(nèi)容感到迷惘時(shí)，我們還可以充分利用寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容2）里的a) b) c)來(lái)幫助我們進(jìn)一步定向。如:
實(shí)例二（閱讀材料－記敘文）
Once upon a time, there was a king who ruled a rich country. One day, he went for a trip to some distant areas of his country. When he was back to his palace, he complained that his feet were very painful, because it was the first time that he had gone for such a long trip, and the road that he went through was very rough and stony. He then ordered his people to cover road of the entire country with leather. Of course, this would need hundreds of thousands of cows’skin, and would cost a huge amount of money. Then taking risks of being killed, one of his wise servants dared himself to tell the king, “Why don’t you cover your feet with a piece of leather?” Luckily the king was an open-minded and easily-persuaded man. So though he was surprised, he later agrees to take the suggestion to make a “shoe” for himself. There is actually a valuable lesson in this story: to make this world a happy place to live in, you’d better change yourself—your heart not the world. 本例中的主題是“改變世界還是改變自己”。那么我們可以分析這一主題：人什么時(shí)候需要做出這種選擇——改變世界還是改變自己？當(dāng)然是遇到困難或矛盾時(shí)。那么，主人公遇上了什么困難？最終是通過(guò)改變世界還是改變自己來(lái)解決難題的呢？
至此，還不知道如何預(yù)測(cè)的同學(xué)，不妨再進(jìn)一步地利用后面的具體內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)a) b)來(lái)預(yù)測(cè)如下：
1. 原文中主人公遇到（經(jīng)歷）了怎樣的困難？
2. 他/她是如何應(yīng)對(duì)的？是改變世界還是改變自己？
與單純地通過(guò)主題/話題來(lái)進(jìn)行預(yù)測(cè)而言，這一種預(yù)測(cè)方法（利用寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容2里的各小點(diǎn)）更適合記敘文體的閱讀材料。
2. 分析文章結(jié)構(gòu)，準(zhǔn)確捕捉要點(diǎn)
有了“指南針”之后，捕捉短文要點(diǎn)就容易多了。那么，如何才能快速、準(zhǔn)確地捕捉到文章的要點(diǎn)呢？
首先，從文體入手。一般來(lái)說(shuō)，讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)里的閱讀材料按文體可以分成兩種：議論文和記敘文。議論文有三要素，即論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)、論證，文章的整體結(jié)構(gòu)多數(shù)為總分結(jié)構(gòu)、分總結(jié)構(gòu)、平行結(jié)構(gòu)等。因此，我們通常可以在第一段或最后一段找論點(diǎn)。
如實(shí)例一，論點(diǎn)就在第一段開(kāi)頭找到：Mixed-ability teaching can do good to bright children. On the contrary, streaming students have many disadvantages.
再看實(shí)例二，這是一篇記敘文，我們要找出它的四要素：when, where, who, what等。帶著這幾個(gè)問(wèn)題去找，自然很快就找出來(lái)了。
其次，從過(guò)渡語(yǔ)入手。如實(shí)例一中，Besides就是一個(gè)很好的guide, 因?yàn)樗ǔ１硎静⒘谢蜻f進(jìn)的關(guān)系，它后面的it is rather unreal to grade people just
according to their intellectual ability 很明顯是講streaming pupils的'缺點(diǎn)，那么在它前面必然還有至少一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)。再?gòu)牡谝欢蔚膁isadvantage看起，就可以迅速找出它的另一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)，即have a bad effect on both the bright and the not-so-bright child as they develop differently，這就是論據(jù)了。第三段一開(kāi)頭，就用了In our classroom， 有具體的地點(diǎn)，那么，一看就知道是在舉例了，且舉的是Mixed-ability teaching所帶來(lái)的好處的例子。
3. 理清邏輯關(guān)系，選擇合適連詞
在捕捉到文章的要點(diǎn)之后，接下來(lái)就是要理清他們之間的邏輯關(guān)系，再找到適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，自然銜接，使之成為一個(gè)連貫的語(yǔ)段。如實(shí)例一可以用圖表示如下：
4. 靈活變化表達(dá)，適度進(jìn)行paraphrase
理清要點(diǎn)之間的邏輯關(guān)系之后，不能簡(jiǎn)單地照搬原句，還必須進(jìn)行適度的paraphrase，即用自己的話進(jìn)行改寫(xiě)，才符合“不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子”的要求。那么，如何才能達(dá)到“雁過(guò)不留痕”的效果呢？
(1)同義替換。即用同義或近義的詞語(yǔ)或句型改寫(xiě)，如實(shí)例一中的 “intellectual ability”和“academic ability”就可以用grades(成績(jī))來(lái)替換；“grade pupils according to”則可用judge/group pupils by替換；“It does not take into account the fact”可以變?yōu)镮t fails to consider that...
(2)語(yǔ)態(tài)互換。即主語(yǔ)語(yǔ)態(tài)與被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換，如實(shí)例二中he later agrees to take the suggestion to...就可以用它的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)來(lái)表示：he was later persuaded to...
(3)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)與從句的互換。如實(shí)例二中there was a king who ruled a rich country就可以用there was a king ruling a rich country來(lái)表達(dá)。
(4)合并句子。就是將幾個(gè)意義聯(lián)系緊密的句子合并為一句話。如實(shí)例一中的兩個(gè)論據(jù)①We feel that there are many disadvantages in streaming pupils. It does not take into account the fact that children develop at different rates. ②Besides, it is rather unreal to grade people just according to their intellectual ability.就可改為Streaming pupils not only neglects the different rates of students’ development, but also is unfair for them judging only by their grades.
5. 削“枝”去“葉”，實(shí)行精“兵”裁“員”
由于字?jǐn)?shù)有限制，所以在寫(xiě)summary時(shí)還應(yīng)采取一些必要的手段來(lái)進(jìn)行精“兵”裁“員”,減少字?jǐn)?shù)。慣常采用的方法有：
(1)主謂縮寫(xiě)。如they will→they’ll; we are→we’re; should not→shouldn’t; can not→can’t等。
(2)句式省略。如when he crossed the road=when crossing the road. if they’re corrected too much=if corrected too much.
(3)使用代詞或含有替代含義的詞。如實(shí)例二中，有學(xué)生會(huì)這樣寫(xiě)：Once a king wanted to cover the road with leather to protect his feet. A servant advised the king not to cover the road and just make a pair of shoes for himself. Finally the king agreed and made shoes for himself. 這時(shí)，我們可以利用代
詞將其改寫(xiě)如下：Once a king wanted to cover the road with leather to protect his feet, but he was persuaded not to do so. Instead, he made a pair of shoes to achieve the same goal.
四、避免誤區(qū)
1. 要點(diǎn)不齊，“骨” “肉”分離
如實(shí)例一中 “學(xué)校不該分班”是“骨”，“為什么不該分班”則是“肉”。如果只寫(xiě)了Streaming pupils shouldn’t be adopted in schools.則為有“骨”無(wú)“肉”；如果寫(xiě)成Streaming pupils not only neglects the different rates of students’ development, but also is unfair for them judging. only by their grades.則成了有“肉”無(wú)“骨”。這兩種寫(xiě)法都屬于“骨”“肉”分離的典例。
2. 抄襲原文，窮于變化
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